Song lyric · ci to the tune Shi Zhou Man, in two stanzas宋词 · 词,词牌《石州慢》,双调

shí石zhōu州màn慢·hán寒shuǐ水yī依hén痕

zhāng张yuán元gān干Zhang Yuangan · Song宋

Shi Zhou Man: The Cold Water Keeps to Its Old Line

 

hán寒shuǐ水yī依hén痕

chūn春yì意jiàn渐huí回

shā沙jì际yān烟kuò阔

xī溪méi梅qíng晴zhào照shēng生xiāng香

lěng冷ruǐ蕊shù数zhī枝zhēng争fā发

tiān天yá涯jiù旧hèn恨

shì试kàn看jǐ几xǔ许xiāo消hún魂

cháng长tíng亭mén门wài外shān山chóng重dié叠

bú不jìn尽yǎn眼zhōng中qīng青

shì是chóu愁lái来shí时jié节

qíng情qiè切

huà画lóu楼shēn深bì闭

xiǎng想jiàn见dōng东fēng风

àn暗xiāo销jī肌xuě雪

gū辜fù负zhěn枕qián前yún云yǔ雨

zūn尊qián前huā花yuè月

xīn心qī期qiè切chù处

gèng更yǒu有duō多shǎo少qī凄liáng凉

yīn殷qín勤liú留yǔ与guī归shí时shuō说

dào到dé得què却xiāng相féng逢

qià恰jīng经nián年lí离bié别

Underlined words have notes: tap one. The Pinyin button below shows or hides all pinyin. 一 and 不 are marked with the tone you actually say.字下有虚线的,点开有注释。下方的“拼音”按钮可以显示或隐藏全部拼音。“一”“不”标的是实际读出来的变调。

The source text has a wrong character for ruǐ (flower buds); this follows the common text. Some editions also have a different character for xiāo (to wear away), or zài (again) for què in the line about meeting again; the meaning is about the same.

资料库原文“冷蕊”作“冷芯”,应是传抄或转换中的错字,这里依通行本作“蕊”。另外,“暗销”有的本子作“暗消”,“却相逢”有的本子作“再相逢”,意思差不多。

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Line by line逐句翻译

  1. 寒水依痕The cold water still keeps to its old line,寒冷的江水还贴着旧日的水痕,
  2. 春意渐回and the feeling of spring is slowly coming back.春意渐渐回来了,
  3. 沙际烟阔By the sandbank, mist spreads wide.沙滩边,雾气一片开阔。
  4. 溪梅晴照生香Plum blossoms by the stream give off scent in the sunshine,溪边的梅花在晴光里散发清香,
  5. 冷蕊数枝争发a few sprigs in the cold rushing to bloom.寒天里几枝花抢着开放。
  6. 天涯旧恨Far from home, the old sorrow of parting:远在天边,旧日离别的愁苦,
  7. 试看几许消魂see how it makes my soul melt away.你看它让人多么伤心,
  8. 长亭门外山重叠Beyond the farewell pavilion, hills rise layer on layer.长亭外面,山峦一层又一层。
  9. 不尽眼中青The green that fills my eyes never ends;望不尽的满眼青色,
  10. 是愁来时节this is the season when sorrow comes.正是愁绪涌来的时候。
  11. 情切How deep and urgent my feelings are.我的情意多么深切。
  12. 画楼深闭I picture her shut deep inside the painted house.想她在画楼里紧闭着门,
  13. 想见东风I imagine the east wind blowing,我想象东风吹过,
  14. 暗销肌雪and her snow-white skin quietly growing thin.她雪白的肌肤悄悄消瘦了。
  15. 辜负枕前云雨We have let our closeness go to waste,白白辜负了枕边的恩爱,
  16. 尊前花月and the times of wine, flowers and moonlight.还有对着酒杯赏花看月的时光。
  17. 心期切处When my longing is at its sharpest,在心里最想念的时候,
  18. 更有多少凄凉how much loneliness I still carry,还有多少凄凉的心事,
  19. 殷勤留与归时说which I will save, with all my heart, to tell her when I come home.我要好好留着,等回家时说给她听。
  20. 到得却相逢By the time we finally meet again,等到我们真的重逢时,
  21. 恰经年离别it will have been a whole year apart.恰好已经分别整整一年了。
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Words字词注释

依痕yī hén
yī hén: keeping to the old water line. In winter the water drops and leaves a mark; in early spring it has not yet risen.依痕:贴着原来的水痕。冬天水落下去,留下旧水痕,早春的水还没有涨起来。
沙际shā jì
shā jì: the edge of the sandbank.沙际:沙滩边上。
烟阔yān kuò
yān kuò: mist spreading wide over the water.烟阔:水上雾气一片,看上去很开阔。
晴照qíng zhào
qíng zhào: shining in the clear sunlight.晴照:晴天的阳光照着。
冷蕊lěng ruǐ
lěng ruǐ: flowers in the cold, meaning plum blossoms. Ruǐ is the heart of a flower.冷蕊:寒天里的花朵,指梅花。蕊,花心,代指花。
争发zhēng fā
zhēng fā: rushing to bloom.争发:抢着开放。
天涯tiān yá
tiān yá: the edge of the sky, a place far from home.天涯:天边,指离家很远的地方。
旧恨jiù hèn
jiù hèn: old sorrow, here the pain of parting.旧恨:旧日的愁苦,这里指离别的痛苦。
几许jǐ xǔ
jǐ xǔ: how much.几许:多少。
消魂xiāo hún
xiāo hún: so sad it is as if your soul melts away. The writer Jiang Yan said nothing makes the soul melt like parting.消魂:伤心得好像魂都没了,形容极度悲伤。南朝江淹《别赋》说“黯然销魂者,唯别而已矣”。
长亭cháng tíng
cháng tíng: a roadside pavilion where travellers rested and friends said goodbye.长亭:古时路边供人歇脚的亭子,也是送别的地方。
眼中青yǎn zhōng qīng
yǎn zhōng qīng: the endless green of hills and grass before his eyes.眼中青:眼前望不到头的青山和草色。
情切qíng qiè
qíng qiè: feelings that are deep and urgent.情切:感情急切、深挚。
画楼huà lóu
huà lóu: a beautifully painted building, where she lives.画楼:装饰华美的楼,指她住的地方。
暗销肌雪àn xiāo jī xuě
àn xiāo jī xuě: her snow-white skin quietly wastes away. That is, she grows thin from missing him.暗销肌雪:雪白的肌肤悄悄消瘦了。意思是她因为思念而消瘦。
辜负gū fù
gū fù: to let something go to waste, to fail someone.辜负:白白错过了,对不起。
云雨yún yǔ
yún yǔ: here, the closeness of husband and wife or lovers.云雨:这里指夫妻或恋人之间的亲密欢爱。
尊前花月zūn qián huā yuè
zūn qián huā yuè: happy times with wine, flowers and the moon. Zūn is a wine cup.尊前花月:对着酒杯、赏花看月的美好时光。尊,酒杯。
心期xīn qī
xīn qī: what the heart hopes for, a promise kept in the heart.心期:心中盼望的事,心里的约定。
殷勤yīn qín
yīn qín: warm and earnest.殷勤:情意恳切、周到。
留与liú yǔ
liú yǔ: to save for.留与:留给,留下来等到。
经年jīng nián
jīng nián: a whole year gone, a long parting.经年:过了一整年,指分别很久。
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How to read it读音

数shù
In shù zhī (several sprigs) the character is read shù. Read shǔ, it means to count.“数枝”是几枝的意思,“数”读 shù。读 shǔ 时是“数一数”。
重chóng
In chóng dié (layer upon layer) the character is read chóng.“重叠”的“重”读 chóng,是一层又一层的意思。
04

Background创作背景

We do not know exactly when this ci was written. The poet was far from home. In early spring he saw the cold water, the plum blossoms and the layers of green hills, and thought of the one he loved at home. The first stanza shows early spring in a strange place and the pain of parting. The second imagines her at home missing him and growing thin. At the end he says he will save all his loneliness to tell her when he gets back. Some readers think the sorrow also hides worry about the troubled country.

这首词写作的具体时间不清楚。作者在外地漂泊,早春时节看见寒水、梅花和重重青山,想起远在家中的心上人,写下了这首词。上阕写他乡早春的景色和离愁,下阕设想对方在家里思念自己,日渐消瘦,最后说要把满心的凄凉留到回家时慢慢说。一说词中的离愁还带着对国事的忧虑。

05

The poet作者

Zhang Yuangan (born 1091; the year of his death is uncertain) lived as the Northern Song gave way to the Southern Song. His early ci are graceful and gentle. After the north fell he strongly urged resistance against the Jin. He wrote a farewell ci for Hu Quan, an official punished for opposing peace with the Jin, and lost his own official rank for it. His later ci are bold and stirring, and he is seen as an early patriotic ci poet.

张元干(1091—?),字仲宗,号芦川居士,两宋之交的词人。他早年的词写得清丽婉转。北宋灭亡后,他坚决主张抗金,曾写词送别被贬的抗金大臣胡铨,因此被朝廷除名。他后期的词多慷慨激昂,是南宋爱国词人的先驱之一。

06

The mood意境

The opening paints early spring with care. The water still keeps to its old line, so the ice has only just melted. Mist lies over the sandbank. A few plum sprigs rush to bloom in the cold wind. The scene is new, but the feeling is old. Seeing hill after hill beyond the farewell pavilion, green without end, his sorrow rises. The most touching word in the second stanza is 'I picture'. He does not say how much he misses her. He imagines her in the painted house missing him, growing thin. At the end he saves everything he wants to say until he gets home, like letters kept in a drawer, to be read out line by line when they meet. Then he counts: by then they will have been apart a whole year. Hope and heartache mix, and it feels very real.

开头写早春很细:水还贴着旧水痕,说明冰雪刚化;沙滩上烟雾一片;几枝梅花在冷风里抢着开。景色是新的,心情却是旧的,看到长亭外一层层的山,满眼青色望不到头,愁就跟着涌上来。下阕最动人的是“想见”:他不写自己多想她,而是想象她在画楼里也想着他,人都瘦了。最后他把满肚子的话“殷勤留与归时说”,好像存起来的信,要等见面时一句句讲。可结尾一算,见面时已经分别一整年了。期待里带着心酸,读来很真切。

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